Some people say history is one of the most important school subject. Other people thik that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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It has long been my belief that

history

is one of the greatest subjects in college, students study the past because many citizens can understand how past societies were, the systems, ideologies, governments, cultures and technologies were built, how they operated, and how they have changed. While others believed that the expectation of future

work

mainly is occupied by technology and education major.

To begin

with, many people know that 70 per cent of people who served in the automation and education field earned a lot of money compared to one working in the antiquity specialization. In tandem with

this

, many students flocked to become a scientist.

However

, I strongly believe that an old-day major can not be less important than any other subject at university. Take an example, the majority of students in Japan learned

history

in school as well as studied science and automation at the same time. The main reason is that technology has made communication much simpler in recent times.

On the other hand

, it seems that science and machinery offer more opportunities and prospects in the

future, the positive way to study these meadows is that it allows us to develop new technologies, solve practical problems, and make informed decisions fast way. Many populations strongly desire to

work

based on these majors because

this

helps many communities to better know and understand other cultures and societies.

For instance

, many scientists in Indonesia do not know about the

history

of their own country caused of overnight

work

in the office which leads them to the knowledge of the past so they do not understand how it came to

work

the way it is now. To sum up, in my own opinion, studying both science and technology

also

history

can teach many civilians to understand how the world works and to observe and understand how people and societies behaved and as tools to make communication much simpler in recent times.

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