the pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000

the pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000
The pie charts illustrate the generation of
units
of
electricity
from coal, natural gas, hydro and nuclear power in two various countries in two different
years
, 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, in both countries, the total production of
electricity
increased significantly over 20
years
period. Coal was used as the major source of generation of
electricity
in Australia and France
while
hydro and nuclear power
was
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used as the least source for the production of
electricity
in France.
According to
the pie charts, in Australia, coal accounted for exactly half of the total generation of
electricity
in the year 1980.
However
, it rose dramatically to 130
units
in 2000. One-fifth
units
of
electricity
were generated from hydropower in Australia, in 1980 which was fallen to 2
units
, in 2000.
Likewise
, in 1980, natural gas made up 20
units
of
electricity
which declined steeply to 2
units
20
years
later.
On the other hand
, in France,
electricity
produced from coal remains unchanged for both
years
1980 and 2000 with 25
units
of
electricity
.
In contrast
,
electricity
generated from nuclear power in 1980 numbered 15
units
which went up drastically to 126
units
in the year 2000.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity production
  • Fuel source
  • Renewable sources
  • Non-renewable sources
  • Significant change
  • Evolved
  • Dominant source
  • Introduction of new sources
  • Reliance
  • Electricity production mix
  • Environmental implications
  • Future trend
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