You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

Dear Sir/ Madam I will be participating in your one-month training programme in the UK.
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my supervisor, there is an available position for a social
events
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organizer and would like to express my interest in applying for the role. I graduated from Sheffield Hallam University and
obtain
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a degree in Leisure and
Events
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management. During my college studies, I had
organizes
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organized
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different sporting and recreational
events
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for the school as it was one of the requirements to pass the course.
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, I have been working as an activity and recreation coordinator in a private clubhouse in Hong Kong. My main duties are to organise and host different leisure and sports
events
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for our club members. As for the position, I would like to request more information
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as the job duties and if there will be monetary rewards. ,
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Moreover
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will the job require any special qualification on my side and the possibility of a full-time position after the training
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Thank you for your kind consideration, I do hope to hear from you soon. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me. Sincerely yours, Jay
Sarino
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Sarno

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to include a proper greeting, such as 'Dear [Name]' if you know the name.
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Be careful with small grammatical mistakes, such as 'organizes' instead of 'organized.'
coherence and cohesion
You may want to break your requests into bullet points for clarity.
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You have a clear interest in the role and a good introduction to your background.
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Your experience is relevant and well presented.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • interested
  • event
  • organiser
  • role
  • request
  • information
  • experience
  • organisation
  • responsibility
  • participants
  • training
  • programme
  • welcome
  • details
  • skills
  • communication
  • helpful
  • plan
  • team
  • creative
  • manage
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