Dear Sir/ Madam
I will be participating in your one-month training programme in the UK.
According to
my supervisor, there is an available position for a social Linking Words
events
organizer and would like to express my interest in applying for the role.
I graduated from Sheffield Hallam University and Use synonyms
obtain
a degree in Leisure and Wrong verb form
obtained
Events
management. During my college studies, I had Use synonyms
organizes
different sporting and recreational Change the verb form
organized
events
for the school as it was one of the requirements to pass the course. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, I have been working as an activity and recreation coordinator in a private clubhouse in Hong Kong. My main duties are to organise and host different leisure and sports Linking Words
events
for our club members.
As for the position, I would like to request more information Use synonyms
such
as the job duties and if there will be monetary rewards. ,Linking Words
Linking Words
Moreover
will the job require any special qualification on my side and the possibility of a full-time position after the trainingAdd a comma
Moreover,
.
Thank you for your kind consideration, I do hope to hear from you soon. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me.
Sincerely yours,
Jay Change the punctuation
?
Sarino
Correct your spelling
Sarno
s.jieldsen