You are studying overseas. You need to return to your country before the end of the semester for a family event. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter - request time off - explain why you need to leave early - reassure him/her that your studies will not suffer

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to the principal to ponder the light on
for
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days off due to the family event in my national state. Because studying abroad, I admit that
this
will not be affecting on studies. 
Moreover
, I am a student in the Network and Internet security specialists program which is
teaching
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by Professor Kamal Mohan. I already told
to
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him about my vacation and he agreed with me. So, I request you to give me some holidays for the family function in my country.
Additionally
, I would like to please you for early leave. I know,
this
is the academy rule to inform before two weeks and I am writing you just one week left. I request you to please kindly give me
holidays
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as per the event held on a week later.
However
, I assure you that I will connect with the institute via online classes on zoom and will submit assignments on time. As I received many awards as a bright student, so it will
my
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responsibility to not suffer from my studies. Thank You, I look forward to hearing a positive concern from you. Yours Faithfully, Jasmeen Puar
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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