You are looking for part-time work. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter introduce yourself say what skills and work experience you have explain the sort of job you are looking for You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Nimal Pathirana living in Rathanapura and 25 years old. I am seeking a

job

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after my graduation. It would be highly appreciated if you can find a

job

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for me. I am competent in English and French and I am good at communication skills. As well as, I have computer literate. I worked in Import-Export agency in Colombo as a part-time

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when was doing my studies

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year. At present, I am working at a hotel as an Administrative Officer.

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, I do not prefer that career owing to it will not relate to my studies.

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,I am searching for a

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from your employment agency. I am looking for a

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for

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the laboratory

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hospital

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side.

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, it would not be a huge issue that

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of laboratories

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as textiles or cosmetics.

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, it would be great if it is located around Colombo and only worked on work days. I am looking forward to a favourable response. Yours faithfully Nimal Pathirana

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

171 words

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