Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn the children into good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A multitude of parents is grimly advocating that children are more likely to be educated by

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as qualified employees and law-abiding citizens to contribute themselves to their countries as opposed to thinking independently and critically about their own

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and ambitions. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with

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view. There are several reasons why I would argue against teaching

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is aimed to give priority to cultivating a variety of workers and dwellers.

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, it is obvious that a multiplicity of

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are educated in different abilities and knowledge at school, which provides more opportunities that they cannot acquire by themselves, especially some poverty-stricken

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as becoming exchange

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to study abroad and participating in practical activities to enrich their experience.

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, governments are strongly appealing to

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to pay more attention to multicoloured school lives and competitions, in order to explore more potential

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in many aspects.

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, I believe that if

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could be taught courses as a springboard to know more about the world. Particularly like philosophy, math, art, music, moral class and science.

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, educational institutions are not only teaching children how to possess more knowledge but

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a contribution to their countries and governments with more outstanding employees for future development.

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, undeniably, overforce

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to become excellent citizens may have an adverse impact on societies. One highly persuasive example is that people under the pressure of overload may ubiquitously generate mental and physical problems.

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, some college entrance examinations in many countries cause a myriad of

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up all night, which results in death eventually.

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, becoming individuals should be prioritized and dealt with immediately by

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. By way of conclusion,

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some over-competitive

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tend to cultivate

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' excellent academic performance, authorities and

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various types of things to cultivate them as independent individuals first.