You are a student at a university in the UK. you have recently lost your University ID card. Write a letter to the local Police station. In your letter, -Who are you? -What happened -Ask to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to tell my ordeal about an incident at Saint Willson Bus Stand where I lost my university

card

last

Sunday. I am Jacob, a student of

Harrison

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the Harrison

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University of London with Student registration

number P12556. I was travelling to Cera Hills college for my seminar and during the transit, Inadvertently my

card

slipped from my upper pocket which I checked twice prior to the bus stop. Because

this

area falls under the jurisdiction of your police station, kindly

this

letter

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treated as a

first

information report.

In addition

, in order to record my personal details, photocopies of my passport, address proof and date of birth proof along with a copy of my lost

card

are attached herewith

this

letter. I request you kindly process my details and issue me a police verification certificate which is a requirement to apply for a new university

card

. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Harry Brown.

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You are a student at a university in the UK. you have recently lost your University ID card. Write a letter to the local Police station. In your letter, -Who are you? -What happened -Ask to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card.

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, says that this would have little effect on public health and others measures are required. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that success comes from hard work. Others think that it has to do with luck. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Give details and examples to support your opinion.

Internet technology means people no longer need to travel to foreign countries to understand how they live Do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that government is wasting the money on the arts, and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view.

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?