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Write a letter to a colleague asking for assistance setting up equipment for an upcoming presentation of yours. Include What the presentation is about The equipment needed Suggestions to set it up

#colleague #assistance #equipment #presentation #suggestions
Dear Mr Burke, I am writing
this
 letter to
asking
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 you to do me
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a favor
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favor
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 which is
urgen
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urgent
.
First
of
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, now I am out of
the
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town visiting my grandmother and
that is
 quite far away from the office. I have an upcoming project presentation in two days.
Which
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 is about the singer who is coming
on
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next
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 three months, because
this
 is going to be the
first
 concert after the COVID-19 situation in our town and people keeps an eye on
this
. Unfortunately, I could not be there on time
setting
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 up the equipment that day.
Secondly
, I need
microphone
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, speaker and projector to present my project through a big screen. You could ask Micheal for helping you. I am looking forward to hearing from you Best regards, Patrick Dempsey
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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