Write a letter to a colleague asking for assistance setting up equipment for an upcoming presentation of yours. Include What the presentation is about The equipment needed Suggestions to set it up

Dear Mr Burke, I am writing
this
letter to
asking
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ask

The to-infinitive that follows the verb writing requires the base form. Change asking to the base form.

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you to do me
Add an article
a favor

The noun phrase favor seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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favor
Change the spelling
favour

The spelling of favor is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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which is
urgen
Correct your spelling
urgent

If you don’t want urgen to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

.
First
of
Correct pronoun usage
allof

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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, now I am out of
the
Correct article usage
apply

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town visiting my grandmother and
that is
quite far away from the office. I have an upcoming project presentation in two days.
Which
Correct pronoun usage
This

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is about the singer who is coming
on
Change preposition
in

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next
Correct article usage
the next

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three months, because
this
is going to be the
first
concert after the COVID-19 situation in our town and people keeps an eye on
this
. Unfortunately, I could not be there on time
setting
Change the verb form
to set

Setting doesn’t seem to work here.

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up the equipment that day.
Secondly
, I need
microphone
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a microphone

The noun phrase microphone seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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, speaker and projector to present my project through a big screen. You could ask Micheal for helping you. I am looking forward to hearing from you Best regards, Patrick Dempsey
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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