The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that says that the authority is obligated to spend more money on developing

science

than

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other courses for the process of active development of the

country

.

This

essay will discuss both opinions and explain why I believe that

science

should be treated in the same way as in other areas. On the one hand,

science

is a background of our present,due to the fact that everything that surrounds us is created thanks to scientists and their skills which

has

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been developed throughout the centuries.

Thus

,in order to keep and improve all the inventions that

helps

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in our daily, we have to fund

in

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it

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.

Secondly

,the question of scientific improvement

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simply has a competitive

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an

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economic character. Currently,in the world which

country

has the best and latest technologies and scientific achievements,that

country

is at the top of the financial pyramid.

For instance

,countries

such

as America and Japan have the latest contemporary devices in their possession,they are purchased from all over the planet,

furthermore

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representatives of different countries come to at least try it on the spot,

therefore

the budget of the

country

is growing in several industries at once.

On the other

hand

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an increase

of

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scientific education cannot guarantee a hundred

percent

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successful progress of the

country

.

Firstly

,it is seen that the studies of other disciplines of education can attribute national

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improvement

improvment

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improvement

.

For example

, practical subjects

such

as motor mechanics or cooking

,

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would have a positive influence and society as there would be

less

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unemployed workers

,

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since not all people are predisposed to

science

,which

also

means

less

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crimes and

this

is

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also

contributes civilized environment.

Second

, other courses,

such

as art,allow people to express themselves in a creative way

throughout

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music

theater

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and films.

Subsequently

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it can improve people's life quality and

also

help toward an overall urban advancement. In conclusion,

although

science

is a very beneficial sphere for the future enhancement of the world

but

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I still believe that government should invest equally in every particular subject because of

above-mentioned

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reasons.