You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter: • describe the item • explain where and when you left it • say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir, I, Kuljeet Kaur, resident of Ambala city, writing

this

letter to you to lodge a complaint regarding the loss of an item during my journey from Ambala to Delhi.

Last

Monday, I had started my journey from the city railway station and I was carrying a laptop during that time. It was of black colour having a grey tag on its back and of brand Acer.

This

device belongs to my official property and contains office records as well as data. I remember when I board the train, it was lying beside me. Before reaching the destination place I had seen it. As I was carrying a lot of luggage, due to that I forget to pick up the laptop and left it behind. After that when I was travelling to my home

then

I realised that my laptop is not with me. I need to hand over

this

device to my office as it has all the mandatory information pertaining to our organization.

Therefore

, I request you to please ask the staff to locate it and hand it over to the station and make a call to me, so that I can collect it from there. Look forward to hearing a positive reply from your side. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

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9 paragraphs

214 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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