With the increasing demand for energy such as oil and gas, people start to look for their sources in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to the increasing numbers of

energy

demand, some people advocate

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the alternative

energies

in the barren

area

.

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compelling reasons to sustain my belief. Undoubtedly, the

energy

resources are limited and have some problems in the cities.

Therefore

, people had dug up and consumed the

energies

that

locates

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in the urban

area

. After industrialization and urbanization, there are decreasing

storages

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of fossil fuel and natural gas plants in the urban

area

.

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, we should make an attempt to find

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sustainable

energy

resource in the

suburban

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.

Although

it is difficult to transfer the

energy

into users’ locations and pays for surplus costs in transportation, we can use the advanced and renewal means to overcome it

by

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underground circulation. Turning to the merits, it is no doubt that

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of

energy

sources come from

countryside

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the countryside

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the renewable

energies

used

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to

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abundantly

produce

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by their natural

characters

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in

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remote

area

,

such

as the tide power and the wind power at the coastline.

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, we should look for them

at

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in

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untouched places.

Although

the

energy

conveying can be expensive and has

risk

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a risk

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of leakage. With the well-established equipment and procedure, the transferring duct cannot be the issue

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the far

area

into the urban zone.

Also

, development of the alternative

energies

in the far

area

can keep human life quality away from pollution and damage. In conclusion, even

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building up the

energies

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energy

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power in the remote

area

has several disadvantages. I believe that revealing the new

energies

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energy

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resources in the wildlife can offer more merits than drawbacks

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well-implemented equipment and improvement.