the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.

The illustration demonstrates how people’s tendency to have outside
meals
augmented between 1970 and 2000 and the ratio of
food
budget they spent on homemade
food
and
restaurant
meals
. Generally speaking, people ate a higher number of outside
meals
over
the
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time and their spending on that increased noticeably. As can be seen, people spend one-tenth of their
food
budget to dine outside in 1970 and had around 40
meals
outside the home of which 20
meals
were taken from fast
food
shops.
Next
decade, their expenditure ratio on homemade
food
declined and they spend 5% more
for
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enjoying
meals
from a
restaurant
. In 1980, they ate approximately 60
meals
at a bistro of which roughly 35 were
fast
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food
meals
. Over
the
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time, their spending ratio on
restaurant
meals
soared and in 2000, they had around 90 fast
food
meals
and 50 sitdown
restaurant
meals
. It is worth noticing that
this
tendency swelled their
food
budget for cafeteria
meals
as they spend half of their
food
funds to enjoy outside
meals
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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