Today, many
families
migrate
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for work opportunities. Some are of the opinion
that is
advantageous for the
children
of these
families
; whereas a few
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stateChange the wording
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that
children
will observe more difficult.
Therefore
, ahead of my
both viewpoints would be discussed.
Discussing the former view the proponent reason that,the
children
learn
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so they speak English
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and speak with
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otherFix the agreement mistake
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without any fear.
For instance
, nowadays, many
children
do not participate
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concerns because of their stage fear.
However
,
children
get higher education and job opportunities
in Change preposition
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abroad.
Moreover
,
children
learn their
culture
because Indian
culture
and foreign
culture
are very different .
For example
, when women live foreign country so they dress up
theirChange preposition
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clothes and they
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live
IndiaChange preposition
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so they wear traditional dress.
On the other hand
, there are some problems
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working with
families
.
To begin
with, both the parents are working so there
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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noCorrect your spelling
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enough time
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spendWrong verb form
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with
thereCorrect your spelling
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children
.
Therefore
, working with
familyCorrect article usage
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can provide complete love and care to the
children
.
Further
,
children
do not learn
theirChange preposition
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culture
because
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they live
in Change preposition
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abroad. many people feel homesick and lonely and
cannot adjust
inChange preposition
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theCorrect article usage
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foreign country. Many
children
do not make friends because they are do not know how their
personReplace the word
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behaviorChange the spelling
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and
theyCorrect word choice
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good or not
To sum up and offer my position I would support the latter opinion
a large extent.
Although
some
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that
liveReplace the word
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with
families
in Change preposition
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abroad
it Correct pronoun usage
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is
a Change the article
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advantageous.