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Many parents give their children certain chores or tasks to do at home. Should children have to do chores or tasks at home? Be sure to explain why you think it is a good idea or a bad idea. Include examples to support your reasons.

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It is often argued that a lot of
parents
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 ask their
children
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 to get involved in
household
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 work. In my
opinion
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 it is a positive and a brilliant idea as it will make
children
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 more independent and confident. In the present time, when both the
parents
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 are working for providing a better living
to
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 their families, it is very essential that
children
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 should know the basic
household
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chores
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.
This
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 will indeed make them more responsible.
Furthermore
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, from the
future
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perspective
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 it will definitely help to reduce the hurdles
which
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that
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 they might suffer when they leave the
home
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 for higher education.
Parents
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 are the best mentors
of
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 the child. By
invoving
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involving
 them in small
tasks
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 at
home
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such
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 as cleaning their room or arranging
cupboard
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, they try to make them self-dependent. To illustrate, in a survey conducted
in
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the
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Manchester University in the United Kingdom, it was found that students who knew the basic
household
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tasks
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 were able to easily adapt to the hostel
life
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 in comparison to those who have never done
these kind
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 of
chores
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 before.
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, preparing the
offsprings
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offspring
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 from the initial stages of
life
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 helps them for
their
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 better
future
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.
Nevertheless
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,
parents
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 always think positive and for the betterment of their
children
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. By assigning
few
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a few
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tasks
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 at
home
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 they want to nurture them in a way that in
future
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 they can become more responsible and they can set an example for their siblings.
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, in most
of
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the rural areas in India, the child is taught to do basic
chores
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 from the initial stages of their
life
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 so that when they grow up they do not face any kind of difficulty even in the harsh conditions.
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, by doing so,
children
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 learn the ability of self-responsibility. In summary, if the child has a
habbit
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habit
 of performing basic
household
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chores
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 on its own from
the
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childhood, it will definitely make their
life
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 in
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future
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the future
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more
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easier and simples.
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, I strongly opine that
children
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 should be taught certain
tasks
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 at
home
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 for their betterment and growth in
life
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.

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