Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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people

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are choosing to live

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independently

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independently

or alone rather than with their families

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, it could affect the community.In my opinion,

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agree with

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view in several aspects. It is true that nowadays

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live separately from their parents. The main reason is they want to independently so they don't have to depend on their parents.

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alone, they have to learn many

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such

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as cooking and cleaning. And many

people

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think that living with friends could save a lot of living expenses.

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other hand

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, living with friends or alone will be

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danger

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. The reason is

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living

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that livng

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livng

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living

without their families no one could protect them.

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, if there is a thief in

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, no one is there to help them fight the thief. In conclusion, while there are various options in which

people

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could choose how to live their life,

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believe

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belive

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that living alone or

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with friend

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friend

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is not always a good

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due to a range of negative aspects.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Erosion
Communal cohesion
Geographical dispersion
Interpersonal relationships
Socio-economic factors
Real estate dynamics
Psychological well-being
Technological facilitation
Independence
Traditional vs modern lifestyles
Intergenerational relationships
Virtual communities

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Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Every country in the world has its own road rules, but many drivers don’t obey them. What do you think are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

many parts of the world people are relying more and more on prepared food from grocery stores and restaurants because they are too busy to cook at home .this is bad because home cooked food is much better for us to what extend do you agree or disagree ?