Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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years
people
are choosing to live Correct your spelling
independently
indepently
or alone rather than with their families Correct your spelling
independently
however
, it could affect the community.In my opinion, i
agree with Change the capitalization
I
this
view in several aspects. It is true that nowadays people
live separately from their parents. The main reason is they want to independently so they don't have to depend on their parents. For example
, when live
alone, they have to learn many Change the verb form
living
skill
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skills
such
as cooking and cleaning. And many people
think that living with friends could save a lot of living expenses. In
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the other
other hand
, living with friends or alone will be Change the wording
another hand
other hands
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a danger
danger
. The reason is Replace the word
dangerous
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living
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that livng
livng
without their families no one could protect them. Correct your spelling
living
For example
, if there is a thief in house
, no one is there to help them fight the thief. In conclusion, while there are various options in which Add an article
the house
people
could choose how to live their life, i
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I
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believe
belive
that living alone or Correct your spelling
believe
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with friend
friend
is not always a good Fix the agreement mistake
friends
options
due to a range of negative aspects.Correct the article-noun agreement
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