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Completing University education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job,on the other other people think developing skills and experience is more important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion

#university #education #job #people #skills
Children’s
 education and healthcare are among the most concerning aspects
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 the race to modernize and industrialize our nation. Since their bodies are still growing, children are considered
as
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seeds for
new
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 future. And in order to grow that seed into a plant,
food
 is particularly one of the significant factors. Providing the necessities in a meal for students might help their bodies function properly focusing on studying for a better future. While the tree needs soil, water, minerals, and light for their photosynthesis and respiratory, human needs
food
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alive
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. A healthy meal can provide
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various
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of
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nutrition that our bodies need to maintain the operation of organs.
Food
 goes inside and generates energy supporting
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our daily routines
such
 as exercises, work, or study.
Therefore
, a nutritious meal has a huge impact on the study of children, keeping their energy levels higher for effective lessons.
Although
 the importance of the meal is appreciated, there is
also
 a question left about who will take
this
 responsibility for
children’s
 meals at school. It could be the kitchen of schools where chefs prepare every meal in a day, the
food
 here must be carefully checked in order to ensure the quality and the
children’s
 health.
Also
, parents can prepare their
children’s
 packed lunch, which could provide them with their
favorite
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food
 and
flavor
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. In general, a healthy meal is not only a key to the effective study of children
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 but
also
 gives a significant contribution to their health
afterward
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. And so as to accomplish that task, the help of parents and school are both required.
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