Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

In recent years, it is popular that youngsters are taking a gap years after graduation. It is

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beneficial

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beneficial

for some and considered a waste of time for others.

This

essay will discuss both sides in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, taking a job year before a university has advantageous effects on many aspects.

For example

, teenagers can try numerous careers in different fields.

This

will help them to build their future easily and gain many qualifications.

In addition

, working for one or two years will help youngsters to communicate with different employers and managers.

This

can improve communication skills and personality.

Moreover

, some individuals may choose to travel out of the country.

This

option will teach them different cultures and deal with different people from other nationalities.

On the other hand

, many teenagers think that work after high school is a waste of time. It is better to finish studying immediately

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the

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job after college graduation.

Also

,

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number of families prefer early marriage

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for

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females. Their view is to have a family is more important than

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a job

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after school.

Furthermore

, taking a rest from

study

leads to

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of motivation for some individuals. When their colleagues graduate from a

college

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they may lose the

study

life.

Lastly

, others prefer to

study

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and PhD in

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young age. To conclude, working before universities has many pros and cons. It mostly depends on a person's situation and personality.

However

, it is very important to

study

and discuss both aspects before deciding the final decision.