It is argued that people will gain more benefits when engaging in team sports such as football. Other people, however, believe that it is better to participate in individual sports like golf or tennis. I personally agree with the first group
Nowadays,
sports
become a major part of people
's activities. There is a group of people
are thinking that people
should participate in team
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a team
sport
, but others think Fix the agreement mistake
sports
the
different way. Change the article
a
This
statement will present both Correct your spelling
thought
taught
tought
.
On the one hand, to enjoy the Correct your spelling
thoughts
sports
activities, people
have to play the sports
that are team
to earn more Add an article
the team
a team
connection
and get to communicate with other Fix the agreement mistake
connections
people
. For example
, if you play a
football Correct article usage
apply
which
there are 11 Change preposition
in which
people
in each team
, you will get to know a lot of people
than individual sports
. some other players could give you advice and suggest how to play football better. However
, participate
in Wrong verb form
participating
team
sports
will make you enjoy and will never get bored of it.
On the other hand
, attending to
individual Change preposition
apply
sports
such
as golf, tennis, or badminton will gain more benefits
from it. In addition
, you will get to be with yourself and be more patient. Correct your spelling
Even though
Eventhough
you will not get to communicate like Correct your spelling
Even though
team
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a team
sport
but there is community
that Add an article
a community
the community
give
you Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
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advice
advices
. Other than that, your friends from individual Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
sports
will be your opponents too. For example
, golf is a sport
that need
a lot of patients, but after the match Change the verb form
needs
is end
, you will get to communicate with Change the verb form
ends
opponents
and at Correct pronoun usage
your opponents
last
they will become Add a comma
,last
you
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your
friends
.
To summarize, Add the comma(s)
,friends
in
each Change preposition
apply
sport
have their
own Correct pronoun usage
its
benefits
. It depends on the player, how
much they will earn the Correct word choice
and how
benefits
from it. Moreover
, in my opinion
I think that engaging in Add a comma
,opinion
team
sports
will give me benefits
more than individual activities because I am more enjoy when I am with a lot of people
. However
, you have to choose your own sport
and gain the benefits
as much as possible.Submitted by phakinyiangyong on
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