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Some people believe that exams are an inappropriate way of measuring students performance and should be replaced by continuous assessment. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

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It is often argued that
global level
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 game
events
such
 as
FIFA
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 world cup, Olympics, Cricket, or any other sporting
events
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 could create massive expenses along with vivid difficulties to its’ organizing countries.
However
,
on the other hand
, those organizers receive significant benefits
such
 as global awareness, recognition, and ticket sale income. Despite a few drawbacks , organisers could gain
significant
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 amount of benefits from those global tournaments ,
Hence
 I disagree with the given statement. Proceeds from ticket sales could be mentioned as one of the key benefits to the hosts.
Furthermore
,
attraction
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 of foreign tourists could create alternative revenue sources
to
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 the local community in an effective way.
Additionally
,
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 to claim some elements in the cost is another advantage to the receiving state.
However
, public awareness and glory that could gain by hosting an international sporting event is the prime benefit.
This
 is like a massive promotional campaign with
larger
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 audience around the world.
Hence
this
 could attract potential investors and bring out lots of opportunities to the country.
In contrast
, some people opine that
cost
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 with international entertainment activities
such
 as sports
events
 are a waste of public funds, and they believe these funds could have been occupied for the well-being of the habitants.
Furthermore
,
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the influx of tourists from different parts of the globe could create
negative
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 impact
to
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 the culture of the local community and some argue
this
 could even bring different diseases to the country.
Therefore
, those points can be considered
as
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negative aspects. Even though
,
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 hosting global games could bring
above
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 minor disadvantages to the organisers, hosts could gain many positives than the negatives as previously mentioned.
Therefore
, I firmly believe that patronage
to
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 global stage sporting
events
 will generate more opportunities
to
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 the hosts than the problems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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