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Many people argu that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Other think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your Opinion.

#people #argu #quality #school #students #comments #criticism #teachers #loss #respect #discipline #classroom
Nowadays, a powerful hierarchy exists in many
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 institutes.
This
 situation is more common, especially, in undeveloped
countries
such
 as Turkey, Sierra Leone and Cambodia. One of the most
distincitive
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distinctive
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implementation
 which
this
education
 mindset brings is that the
teachers
 know everything well.
In other words
, the
students
 are forced to believe in
teachers
 without asking any questions. When it is observed the developed
countries
such
 as Finland, Sweden and others, it is clear that the
students
 are free in analysing
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 given by
teachers
. From my perspective, the reasonable method is that not only the
education
 system provides
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theoretical
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theoretical
 or practical information to the
students
, but
also
 the
students
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education
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education
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based on
teachers
, it is almost impossible to emerge the new ideas. The main reason behind lies is that
students
' opinions
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 do not carry any importance.
For example
, given the research and development rates around the world, it is clear that the
countries
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 comprehensive
education
 system,
which
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teachers
 and
students
 produce the different sights, are ahead of other
countries
 which they do not own. Another fact is that the reciprocal interaction between
teachers
 and
students
 is to improve
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social capabilities. Eventually, it is a well-known matter that an individual, who passed through
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high quality
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education
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 more
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empathy
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which
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education
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strict discipline conditions, in general, it is not expected
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students
 to criticize the
teachers
. What is more, as
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is mentioned
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, it is a pervasive belief that being lost the teacher's charism by
students
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or
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 state authority. To recapitulate,
education
 is not a military service
which
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 the hierarchy plays an important role,
in contrast
 to
this
,
education
 should carry the meaning that the
students
 represent various views and solve many problems in the real world.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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