You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: When did you visit the hotel. the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter in order to express my concern regarding a bag which is left in the hotel during my weekend visit. I visited 'The Taj Hotel' on the 10th of June and stayed here for five days. I checked out from

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place on the evening of the 14th of June.

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, when I reached home

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I come to know that I have left my laptop bag at the hotel. It contains my laptop as well. I remember it was placed on a table in the room in which I spent my days. I was living in room no 251 on the fourth floor. It was of the brand HP and black in colour. Apart from

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, It

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has a tag on its strap on which I had marked my name. It will help staff to identify the bag. It would be really appreciable if you could please locate it and inform me so that I can make arrangements for its collection. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

kuljeetkaur19941Wed Jun 29 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

174 words

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You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: *When did you visit the hotel. *the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag

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Today in many countries in order to find work people have to move away from their friends and family. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Individuals frequently opt to watch foreign movies instead of local ones. However, though I vehemently agree with such a statement, I believe that the government should provide economic incentives to bolster national film industries.

Environmental problems are increasing in developing countries. what are some possible solutions for this issue

You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: When did you visit the hotel. the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag