You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: When did you visit the hotel. the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter in order to express my concern regarding a bag which is left in the hotel during my weekend visit. I visited 'The Taj Hotel' on the 10th of June and stayed here for five days. I checked out from

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place on the evening of the 14th of June.

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, when I reached home

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I come to know that I have left my laptop bag at the hotel. It contains my laptop as well. I remember it was placed on a table in the room in which I spent my days. I was living in room no 251 on the fourth floor. It was of the brand HP and black in colour. Apart from

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, It

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has a tag on its strap on which I had marked my name. It will help staff to identify the bag. It would be really appreciable if you could please locate it and inform me so that I can make arrangements for its collection. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

Submitted by kuljeetkaur19941 on Wed Jun 29 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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9 paragraphs

174 words

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You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: *When did you visit the hotel. *the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag

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A debate has arisen over whether the government should focus on supporting homeless people or implement other measures to address homelessness. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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