More and more people buy a wide range of household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Do you think this is positive or negative development?
It cannot be argued that technology has brought massive advancement to goods, including
household
products. An increasing number of people
begin to purchase more of these items such
as television, microwave oven and rice
cooker. This
essay will discuss why I believe it is a positive development despite its negative setbacks.
In recent years more technological household
products have been launched and triggered the urge for people
to buy them. New items are usually portrayed as more convenient and easy-to-use in many people
's perspectives. For instance
, a new version of rice
cookers, that would tell its user that steamy rice
is cooked, has received a lot of attention which lead to more people
buying this
item at an unnecessary rate. This
encourages the behaviour of overspending and demolishing the traditional way of life which can be negative development in society.
On the contrary
, I believe more people
buying a wide range of household
items signifies how well the economy and society are progressing, and how people
start to integrate with technology more, which I see as positive impacts. As people
are spending, that means there's money being circulated within the economy and more people
are being hired. For instance
, as more consumers purchase the new version of rice
cooker, the company, that produces it, is growing. This
means more jobs available to the society and it can increase buying power of the working class. In addition
to that, it also
shows people
are now embracing the advancement of technology which encourages motivation for future development.
To conclude, a growing number of people
nowadays start to buy a wide range of household
products. Despite negative impacts, in my opinion, I do see more positive improvement than negative.Submitted by nuthchada on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
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- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite