Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

Art

has already existed in human culture for a long time

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and is meaningful in every generation. Some people think learning

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art

from school is helpful for teenagers which can affect the performance of other subjects. In my opinion, the school setting

art

as a fixed course in children’s learning schedules sometimes is quite difficult for them, but I think there are more advantages to notice about

art

. Each kid has different personal characteristics, are not all the children have high

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or

performance

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after learning

art

. Sometimes, children learning to paint or make some artwork is

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a difficult thing for them because not every child has a sense of talent for

art

. To be serious, teenagers may be tired

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having

art

lessons at school,

then

those

students

not only feel bored but

also

cannot obtain anything or assist interest to develop.

Although

art

is not a talented area for all

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the children to try and explore,

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it is necessary for them to know the basic knowledge of the

art

.

Art

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as a visible experience in people’s lives, which can improve the ability of imagination by enjoying

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paintings or the sculptures and it

also

gives

students

some fundamental skills in doing artwork. There are several functions of

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art

which make a huge influence on human development. One of the main points of history that can be recorded is that people use

art

to record their life

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so that

students

can realize more detail about various cultures’ history through those artworks. To sum up,

art

takes an important place in human societies and cultures. Even though there were some drawbacks of force

students

to learn

art

, it still has some benefits for teenagers to study

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art

.