The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given three pie charts
illustrates
the average proportion of four different meals (Breakfast, Dinner, Lunch, Change the verb form
illustrate
Snacks
) which Correct word choice
and Snacks
contains
three various nutrients (Correct subject-verb agreement
contain
Sodium
, Fat, Sugar
) that Correct word choice
and Sugar
considered
Add a missing verb
are considered
as
unhealthy if eaten Change preposition
apply
excessive
Change the adjective
excessively
among
Change preposition
by
American
people.
Correct article usage
the American
Overall
, it is evident from the chart that Dinner contains both Sodium
and Fat in huge amount
Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
compares
to Wrong verb form
compared
Sugar
. However
, Breakfast have
Change the verb form
has
lesser
amount of all nutrients.
Add an article
a lesser
To begin
with, the morning meal have
considerably Change the verb form
has
less
nutrients which Change the quantifier
fewer
includes
Change the verb form
include
Sodium
, Fat, Sugar
Correct word choice
and Sugar
that
accounts for 14%, 16%, Correct pronoun usage
which
16
%. Correct word choice
and 16
On the other hand
, Dinner includes 43% Sodium
which is in maximum number. Following that, saturated Fat holds 37% while
, Sugar
is about 23%.
The Afternoon and evening meals are also
popular among people. In
Change preposition
Which
which
, Lunch Correct pronoun usage
apply
have
two nutritional elements Change the verb form
has
that
is
Change the verb form
are
Sodium
(29%) and Fat (26%), but Sugar
accounts for only 19%. However
, Snacks involves
Fat and Correct subject-verb agreement
involve
Sugar
around 21% and 42% which is significantly greater compares to Lunch and it also
have
14% Change the verb form
has
Sodium
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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