Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people hold a belief that the high speed and pressure of contemporary lifestyle
is
having a detrimental effect on families. Change the verb form
are
For
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Me
me
, I totally agree with Correct pronoun usage
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this
opinion because the rabbit pace results in less family time together and stress causes arguments among family members.
To begin
with, most family issues are rooted in a lack of family time to be with each other. This
is a result of the family members' constant travel for meetings and business or study goals due to their hectic job schedules. As well as
, they rush through work in an effort to provide a better life for their families. Change preposition
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This
also
leads to a lack of attention and guidance of
parents for their children. Change preposition
for
Furthermore
, after a long day at work, they often pay attention to social networking sites instead
of gathering and having dinner together. For example
, I spend my free time listening to music, watching movies or surfing internet
rather than Add an article
the internet
rather than
chatting with my family like before.
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On the other hand
, the hustle of modern society has a negative Correct your spelling
effect
affect
on people's physical and mental health, which leads to disagreements among families. When people come home late after a busy day, tired, and hungry, no longer do they be rational and loving enough to act correctly with those around them, especially their kids. Correct your spelling
effect
As a result
, this
phenomenon makes the family's air even tenser and stuffy or leads to conflicts among family members. Then
, in order to avoid decreasing family ties ourselves, there needs to be mutual understanding.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with this
notion that the fast pace and stress of modern life Correct determiner usage
the
causes
many harmful effects on family relationshipChange the verb form
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