Many jobs require ongoing training and research to stay competitive in a world with rapidly evolving information and technology. Some believe that it is the responsibility of businesses to pay for this training for their staff while others feel it is up to the individual. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One of the debatable concepts of today's world is requiring ongoing training and research . A bunch of personages claim that the

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businesses should pay for

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both stances before presenting my opinion . On one hand , the crusaders

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who said it is the

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their support

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valid grounds .

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made considerable

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nice salary . Actually, they are small and they do not have any income ,

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it is a really nice idea to give them

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global stage in

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training in Oman company . Actually ,

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individual proffered plentiful reasons to show their

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Omani people . Another outlook of them is the experience . By way of explanation , when they do

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salary . To summarize the composition , the essay explicated both views with credible examples . Regarding

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the

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than another view . So , I fully agree with the

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opinion .