You have learned about an international job that is available within the company you currently work for and you want to apply. Write a letter to the hiring manager. In your letter: Say why you are applying for this international position Describe the job you are currently doing for the company Tell him/her why you think you will be good at the job

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter in connection with an international vacancy which is available within the company in New York . I heard about the vacant position from my senior staff.

Thus

, I want to apply for the above-said job as I want to get better career opportunities. Apart from that, I

also

wish to shift there because my family is living there and I was living here alone for about 2 years.

Therefore

, I want to continue my services there. Currently, I am working for the post of an accountant in the organization and offering my services to it for five years. Here, in my current position, I am handling all the financial matters related to accounts as well as dealing with the software Tally which is built for accounting work. I endeavour my services as a storekeeper and maintain a record of inventory present in the firm. I have far better communication skills which are required to work in a foreign nation efficiently and effectively.

Moreover

, I

also

completed my academic qualification from that country which will be proved beneficial for the firm as I can better understand the tradition and culture of societies living there.

Therefore

, It would be really appreciable if you could consider my application and allow me to pursue my work from there. Looking forward to hearing a positive reply from your side. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

236 words

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