Write about the following topic: In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

The development of any nation directly depends on how perfectly new generations are trained. It is argued that infants shall act in a particular way and should not have full casual behaviour.

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essay will discuss that minors have full freedom to behave childish way and not as an adult.

Children

have huge potential to contribute

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the progress of any nation. By suppressing their feelings, internal skills can not be developed fully.

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, it was observed that the intelligence of a group of

children

who came from certain regions of China was limited since they were trained to obey strict rules made by the army during their childhood.

This

shows that they were restricted to behave in certain ways during their development stage. The freedom of

children

can help them to grow more and maintain good health. If regulations control the way of thinking of little ones

then

their growth would be like a robot and can not think much.

For example

, if kids are given open space to do whatever they want

then

the output would be different. They may come out with innovative ideas. Creative toys could help in building up skills and talent. The

children

shall not be taught lessons by strict regulations, rather than freedom would be more effective for positive development. Scientific results

shows

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, that infants with proper primary education have contributed a lot as compared to the others. In conclusion,

children

should be treated in a friendly manner and not with so

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external burdens, rules and regulations.