These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for children. Discuss both views and give your own pinion

Nowadays many families migrate to foreign countries for work.

This

creates a sparking debate in which some believe that the

children

will be benefited from moving abroad whereas some

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. In

this

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I will look

firstly

at the positives and

then

at the negatives with relevant examples.

However

, in my ,

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opinion

the pros outweigh the cons.

To begin

with, family is important.

Therefore

, migrating together as a family will be beneficial to maintaining the family bond.

Moreover

,

children

growing up with their biological parents are more safe and

secure

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than

children

under the custody of others.

For instance

, statistics prove that many

children

assaulted are not under the protection of their parents.

Children

can

also

gain new cultural experiences

in addition

to experience in

high-quality

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education

system

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and medical facilities especially if they are from a

third

-world country.

On the other hand

, moving to a foreign land will affect negatively. To elaborate

further

on

this

matter, many young

children

in countries

such

as Sri Lanka, and India are bought up by their grandparents and

as a

result

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they have a close relationship with their extended family. When the youngsters are taken away from them they will be homesick. But

this

can be minimised as technology is developed and there are plenty of free apps with video calls.

Additionally

, when young people grow up in other countries they will lose track of their cultural values. In conclusion, families moving abroad to work has both advantages and disadvantages

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children

. In my point of ,view the pros outweigh the cons.