There is evidence that inhaling cigarette smoke causes health problems not only for smoker but for non-smokers who inhale other people’s smoke. In view of this, smoking should be banned in all public places, even though this would restrict some people’s freedom and action. What are your views?
There are some main
health
problems
that can be caused by inhaling cigarette
smoke
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smokers
. Non
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Non-smokers
smokers
who inhale smokers
' cigarette
smoke
are called passive smokers
. Health
problems
that a passive smoker could face along with the increasing amount of smoke
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this
, I firmly believe that smoking should be banned in all public spaces
.
Passive smokers
could face more serious health
problems
than active smokers
. The worst part of being a passive smoker is that anyone could become a passive smoker in any situation where the person is in the same place as active smokers
. With this
being said, passive smokers
could be a
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woman
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women
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person
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people
health
complications, a teenager with cancer, and so on. Cigarette
smoke
could not only affect passive smokers
' health
but also
endanger their already existing health
problems
. Some people might have
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severe
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severe
health
conditions such
as GERD or tumor
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smoke
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In my opinion, the government and the management of public places should make a
small chambers and outdoor areas designed for active Correct the article-noun agreement
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smokers
with the availability of ashtrays. This
would be beneficial not only for active smokers
as they could chat with others while smoking, but it also
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a convenience
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smokers
who do not prefer to be in contact with cigarette
smoke
and allergic
to it. These chambers and outdoor areas would not restrict people's freedom and action as non-Add a missing verb
are allergic
smokers
including passive smokers
are also
entitled to their rights of being healthy and not be worried of
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cigarette
smoke
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In conclusion, the government should ban smoking in public spaces
. In response to that, the management of public spaces
alongside the government should make a
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spaces
for active smokers
. This
is to protect non-smokers
and passive smokers
from inhaling cigarette
smoke
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