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Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include: - Ask where to find a place to live - Tell them what type of place you’re looking for - Share some fun things you would like to do when you get there Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Tony, Hope you have settled now in your new place of work Dubai. And to add to your joy, I would like to share some good news
of
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me
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 shifting to Dubai soon too.
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 I would like you to guide me on my residence search. Since my new office will be located in an area called DMCC, I would prefer to have an
apratment
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in the vicinity area.
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 is so,
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becuase
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I can
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 focus on my physical exercise routine after office hours.
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, I am interested in renting a 2-bhk flat, preferably in a community living area where my daily needs are taken care of. It would be a cherry on top if it has a good view from its balcony.
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, the payment structure matters a lot, so would like to seek your guidance in
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understanding
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these matters. I am so excited to meet you Tony and have a blast
fun
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of fun

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 with Sharon,
David
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and David

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 together. We all can go on cycling
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mornings
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the mornings

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 and can drive long during weekends to other states
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forward
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 more enjoyment. Best regards, Mamta

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