Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include: - Ask where to find a place to live - Tell them what type of place you’re looking for - Share some fun things you would like to do when you get there Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Tony, Hope you have settled now in your new place of work Dubai. And to add to your joy, I would like to share some good news

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about

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shifting to Dubai soon too.

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I would like you to guide me on my residence search. Since my new office will be located in an area called DMCC, I would prefer to have an

apratment

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apartment

in the vicinity area.

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is so,

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because

becuase

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because

I can

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focus on my physical exercise routine after office hours.

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, I am interested in renting a 2-bhk flat, preferably in a community living area where my daily needs are taken care of. It would be a cherry on top if it has a good view from its balcony.

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, the payment structure matters a lot, so would like to seek your guidance in

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understanding

understandign

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understanding

these matters. I am so excited to meet you Tony and have a blast

fun

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of fun

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with Sharon,

David

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and David

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together. We all can go on cycling

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mornings

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the mornings

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and can drive long during weekends to other states

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Lookign

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Looking

forward

for

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more enjoyment. Best regards, Mamta

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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