Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?

It is commonly believed that art plays a salient role to keep a nation`s culture and tradition alive. while

arts

education has been proven to help

students

increase cognitive development and develop inventiveness, I believe that it is important for children to be taught

arts

at school as an obligatory subject

however

I do not think it should be supported to the detriment of other

subjects

. On one hand , teaching

arts

provides a considerable chance for

students

to show their creative expressions .when

such

hidden abilities are exposed in school time ,

then

those with exceptional talent can be encouraged to adopt it as an occupation later on in life.

In

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these

subjects

are excellent stress-busters because they break the monotony of tough academic studies and hone communication and

problem solving

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skills,

for example

, in a study, it was seen that

students

who study performing

arts

continued to

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out perform

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non-

arts

students

on the Scholastic Aptitude Test (SAT). For these reasons, the best pedagogy for teaching children is extra-curricular activities like

arts

because not only

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they part of our culture, but

also

these courses complement academic studies.

On the other hand

, in respective of how effective the study of

arts

is for the pupils , they should not dominate the vast majority of the classes at the

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of other

subjects

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in school. To illustrate ,

although

art education helps in career development and brings out

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hidden talent , studying regular

subjects

such

as Science and Mathematics supports in day-to-day life.

For instance

, if a child is unaware of basic Mathematics,

then

he will struggle even with common calculations while buying something. What can be said is

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academic studies are equally important and should

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be paralleled with

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activities,

hence

, children need to have a balance of all

subjects

so as to facilitate a healthy development both mentally and physically. In conclusion, after

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essay has shown the above points , it can be noticed that

arts

are certainly important to develop children`s creativity as well as express their thoughts but they should not exceed the other

subjects

.