You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

Dear Sir/Madam, I'm thrilled by hearing that it has selected me for the HR short
course
that applied through your college website. As per the instructions, I have already booked my air tickets to be there two days prior to the
course
commencement date, which is 12th April 2022. And I hope to return within two days after the
course
finishes. Since I have no relation or immediate contact in England, it would be better if you can provide the details of our accommodation. I would prefer a college hostel to stay during the
course
, but if there is an issue with facilitating
such
, it is
also
fine if you can provide known details of places where I can arrange on my own.
Moreover
, can please let me know more information about what are the facilities that we are entitled to have during the classes?
Such
as using the library, meals, access to the computer lab, etc.
In addition
, what about the booklet that we are getting from the tutor during our lectures? Is it included guidelines for the test that we need to sit for after finishing the program? I would appreciate your earliest response to the letter
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because it will help me in preparation. Yours sincerely, Supun
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