You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Sir/Madam, I'm thrilled by hearing that it has selected me for the HR short

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that applied through your college website. As per the instructions, I have already booked my air tickets to be there two days prior to the

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commencement date, which is 12th April 2022. And I hope to return within two days after the

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finishes. Since I have no relation or immediate contact in England, it would be better if you can provide the details of our accommodation. I would prefer a college hostel to stay during the

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, but if there is an issue with facilitating

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fine if you can provide known details of places where I can arrange on my own.

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, can please let me know more information about what are the facilities that we are entitled to have during the classes?

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as using the library, meals, access to the computer lab, etc.

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, what about the booklet that we are getting from the tutor during our lectures? Is it included guidelines for the test that we need to sit for after finishing the program? I would appreciate your earliest response to the letter

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because it will help me in preparation. Yours sincerely, Supun

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

209 words

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