Although the position of women in society today has improved, there is still a great deal of sexual discrimination. Do you agree?

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modern society,
women
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a
signififant
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role, in every aspect of life. Though
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women
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empoverment
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empowerment
has
engouraged
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encouraged
globally, it is sad to say that,
women
are still facing
harashment
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harassment
.
Women
are the strongest soul considered in
this
world.
Firstly
,
women
are treated as equal to men as
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a fat that,
women
have
achived
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achieved
all the hights in various sectors
sucessfully
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successfully
.
Moreover
, they have the liberty to live
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unconditional life and
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. Though
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global
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economic and
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government
goverment
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government
have drastically changed with more
advancement
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in technology,
but
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they are failing in controlling
womenisers
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womanisers
and
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the discriminations
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discriminations
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faced by
a
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women
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women
.
Women
nowadays, have joined the airforce and combating in war
feailds
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fields
films
this
shows the depth of a
women
's courageousness, as they are leaving men behind. In
golden
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age,
women
were not as
ambious
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ambitious
as today, as they were only meant for housework and child care.
In
addition
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women
had no right to vote. After decades passed everything has changed, but sexuality has not changed still. To overcome
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this
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situation
stiuation
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situation
, the government has to change its
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polices
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and
also
educate
the
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children
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in
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an
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early
ages
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, and make
this
society a better and safe place for living. In conclusion,
denuterilization
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dematerialization
of Rape and
harashment
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harassment
by education and other
awerness
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awareness
programs. I think
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education is fine, but including moral values is the difference which we need to make.
Finally
, it is the only
solutaion
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solution
to deal
sexual
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discrimination.
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