In many countries the proportion of elderly people is increasing. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the number of old generations in some countries is higher than
others
. It has been a widespread argument that Change preposition
in others
this
phenomenon gives positive and negative impacts. However
, I believe that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits.
On the one hand, the elderly is a
vulnerable Change the article
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who
have minimum Correct word choice
and
energies
and tend to give a loss Fix the agreement mistake
energy
potential
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of potential
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In
another word
, if unproductive Fix the agreement mistake
other words
people
increase, Correct article usage
the country
country
expenditure will Change noun form
country's
also
rise. For instance
, a government who
works for a Correct pronoun usage
that
country
that is
full of elderly tend to spend more money to pay insurances
than those which did not. Fix the agreement mistake
insurance
Furthermore
, most of the elderly also
have a fixed mindset who
is trapped in Correct word choice
and
a prior knowledge
and stand for seniority since they ignore an unlearned process. Remove the article
prior knowledge
a piece of prior knowledge
As a result
, the innovation goes slowly and creativity stucks
on its way.
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stocks
On the other hand
, older people
have rich experiences and young people
may have an opportunity to learn from their mistakes. If their experiences become a
patronage for juniors, they will absorb the best practices and Remove the article
apply
do
not repeat their failure. Unnecessary verb
apply
For example
, in a
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decision making
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decision-making
elderly
can gives Correct article usage
the elderly
insight
to map which way is ideal to step.
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the insight
comparing
with Change the form of the verb
compared
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an adult
adult
, experiences are the older Fix the agreement mistake
adults
people
's strengths. However
, I do believe that having more elderly in a country
brings disadvantages such
as reducing productivity and charging more cost
. If so, retirement may become an alternative way for the old Fix the agreement mistake
costs
people
so the younger can dominate the country
and establish the
development.Correct article usage
apply
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