In many countries the proportion of elderly people is increasing. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the number of old generations in some countries is higher than
others
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. It has been a widespread argument that
this
phenomenon gives positive and negative impacts.
However
, I believe that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits. On the one hand, the elderly is
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vulnerable
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have minimum
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and tend to give a loss
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.
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, if unproductive
people
increase,
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the country
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expenditure will
also
rise.
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, a government
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works for a
country
that is
full of elderly tend to spend more money to pay
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than those which did not.
Furthermore
, most of the elderly
also
have a fixed mindset
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is trapped in
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and stand for seniority since they ignore an unlearned process.
As a result
, the innovation goes slowly and creativity
stucks
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stocks
on its way.
On the other hand
, older
people
have rich experiences and young
people
may have an opportunity to learn from their mistakes. If their experiences become
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patronage for juniors, they will absorb the best practices and
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not repeat their failure.
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decision making
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,
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the elderly
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can gives
insight
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the insight
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to map which way is ideal to step. To summarize,
comparing
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with
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an adult
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adult
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, experiences are the older
people
's strengths.
However
, I do believe that having more elderly in a
country
brings disadvantages
such
as reducing productivity and charging more
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. If so, retirement may become an alternative way for the old
people
so the younger can dominate the
country
and establish
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development.
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