It is believed that children from countries with a high level of unemployment should be offered just with a primary education and not with a secondary education as they in any case will not get a job in the future. Do you agree or disagree?

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desired job is a challenging wish for graduates from universities particular, in nations where there is an insecurity

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providing jobs for youngers.So, it has risen the idea that engagement in the tertiary course is a way of wasting money and

time

,even, if it may be right in some situations and some people allege that there is a better way to invest

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of youth for earning income ,but ,I believe the academic education can survive the society from many problems in future

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as finding a solution for insecurity job position and poverty in their country in a long

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.For analyzing

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idea ,I am going to bring the

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of pieces of evidence about the deficiency of professional persons is so harmful to the community and the vast

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of specialities can be able to produce solutions to tackle some issues

such

as reducing unemployment. At

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,the lack of individuals who are professional and aware in their field has many negative effects on the development of the nation,

for example

,one of the infrastructures of education and health system is building suitable places ,so, if the students have left their studies in engineering because there is no position to hire after that passing the study

time

,

as a result

, the schools and hospitals will not be creating and our children will not go to primary school and the patients will not under treatment and lose their life,

finally

,the

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of problems will be increasing and the population will have a difficult

time

for living,

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,policymakers must

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making the companies should be

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sponsor

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work security for citizens,so ,it is clear for having professional policy makers that freshers must be undertaken

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proper

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schooling in primary,secondary and tertiary courses to

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abilities to tackle

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. In conclusion, governments must become the backbone of

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problem and should be produced the vast

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of professionals that have found solutions to solving

this

problem, in the end, I would stress the statement has said that children must leave their higher education because society has not enough positions to hiring them is so harmful and must be removed from the mind of people.