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You are looking for part-time employment. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: • give details about your professional experience and qualifications • explain what type of work you are looking for • say how they can contact you and when you would be available to start work.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest to get registered with your employment agency as I am looking for a suitable part-
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 job and would appreciate your consideration. I graduated from Kasetsart University in 2020 with a
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 Class degree in Mechanical Engineering. At present, I am currently working as a production engineer at
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 factory. As you can see from my CV. I have been working as an Engineer for 2 years, and I decided to change to a part-
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 job. Since I am planning to study for a Master's Degree
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 Business, so I
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 spare
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 for reading and studying as well. I consider myself to be hard-working, reliable, excellent at
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 management and motivated, and I am
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 an expert at engineering skills, strong communication skills and inventory management skills. I believe
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 part-
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 job in the engineering field will suit me well.
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, I can start to work on 1st August. Please find enclosed my references and resume. I appreciate your
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 in reviewing
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 letter, and I am available to come for an interview at any
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 at your convenience. If you need any additional information, please do not hesitate to contact me by phone. Yours sincerely, Jamie P.
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