You are looking for part-time employment. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: • give details about your professional experience and qualifications • explain what type of work you are looking for • say how they can contact you and when you would be available to start work.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest to get registered with your employment agency as I am looking for a suitable part-

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job and would appreciate your consideration. I graduated from Kasetsart University in 2020 with a

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Class degree in Mechanical Engineering. At present, I am currently working as a production engineer at

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factory. As you can see from my CV. I have been working as an Engineer for 2 years, and I decided to change to a part-

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job. Since I am planning to study for a Master's Degree

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Business, so I

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spare

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for reading and studying as well. I consider myself to be hard-working, reliable, excellent at

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management and motivated, and I am

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an expert at engineering skills, strong communication skills and inventory management skills. I believe

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part-

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job in the engineering field will suit me well.

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, I can start to work on 1st August. Please find enclosed my references and resume. I appreciate your

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letter, and I am available to come for an interview at any

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at your convenience. If you need any additional information, please do not hesitate to contact me by phone. Yours sincerely, Jamie P.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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210 words

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