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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I saw your advertisement in the magazine
last
 night and I would like to apply for the job mentioned. I am a student in my
second
 year here in Australia and I need to work a part-time job to help me pay my bills. I noticed your offer was quite generous and it is exactly what I need in my situation. Aside from the resume I attached, I would like to point out some relative aspects that might help my application. I am a very patient person who likes to play and be with kids.
Moreover
, since I have a five years old brother, I know exactly what
this
 job demands. I like to exercise outdoors a lot to enjoy the weather so most of my free time I spend outside
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 my bicycle roaming around and trying to know people's habits and learn how to deal with them. When I am in a good mood, I like to study to improve my level. I would take
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good care of your child and treat him like my little brother. Yours sincerely, Samah
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