You forgot an item of clothing at the hotel where you stayed recently. Write a letter to the hotel manager and include the following: – When did you stay and in what room? – Describe the item you left behind. – What would you like the manager to do about it? #item #hotel #manager #– #room

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Dear sir , I am writing

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letter to inform you about the clothing item which I left in your hotel room . I am Gurinder , resident of ludhiana . I visited Shimla on

4th

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of June with my family and stayed at your hotel Radisson for almost 2 days . We were living on the 3rd floor in room number 302. We checked out from your place on the morning of

6th

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of June. After I reach my destination, I realised that my shirt is left behind in the room . Actually, I packed all my stuff but forget to take a shirt which was hung on the wall of the washroom . It is of Zara brand and is black in colour . There is

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on the pocket of it as well as inside the collar.

Moreover

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piece of clothing is very special to me ,as it was gifted to me by my husband on my birthday.

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, I request you to please ask your staff members to locate it and inform me on my contact number 1234455. I would really appreciate

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you could parcel

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because I am living in Ludhiana which is far away from Shimla . Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully , Gurinder Kaur .

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

224 words

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You forgot an item of clothing at the hotel where you stayed recently. Write a letter to the hotel manager and include the following: – When did you stay and in what room? – Describe the item you left behind. – What would you like the manager to do about it? #item #hotel #manager #– #room

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