You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, state your reason for writing describe the problems and explain how you feel propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action

Dear
Mr.
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Soni My name is Rahul and
i
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live in your apartment no - 27,William Street. I am writing
this
letter to dissatisfaction
in
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your hot water and heating
system
that
fixed
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on
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last
month. As
i
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remember that we were coming to 5
month
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ago when it's completely working
this
system
but after some time
this
system
is not working so you sent plumber. He fixed
this
system
and it's working properly but after
some
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it's not work
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properly . Now you know winter is coming in
next
month and
i
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have no time boiling water because my office Time is very early . I would like you
tell
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about
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my friend. He is know how
heating
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the heating
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system
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are
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repairer
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and he
also
fixed
this
system
as soon as possible. I would
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for your response
this
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problem.
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sincerely, Rahul
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to bring to your attention...
  • I wish to formally complain about...
  • Despite several attempts to repair...
  • The absence of hot water and heating...
  • This ongoing issue has caused considerable inconvenience...
  • As a result, it has become increasingly difficult to...
  • I urge you to take immediate action...
  • I propose that a specialist be consulted...
  • Should this problem persist...
  • I hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience...
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