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The plans below show a student accommodation buildings 2010 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given plans illustrate the building of
student
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accommodation
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 from the year 2010 until now. Generally speaking, the
student
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accommodation
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 building underwent several changes from 2010 to till now. The number of
student
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bedrooms
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 is increased as well as car parking is
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 added. To be specific, in the year 2010 the
student
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accommodation
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 has three gardens, two at the back side and one at the front. The hallway was much bigger and there were three
student
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bedrooms
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 in total with a living room in the north and a kitchen in the east. After some changes in the
accommodation
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, the car parking is added in the south by removing the garden outside; inside the building, the hallway is shrunk and an en-suite room is added. The number of
student
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bedrooms
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 is
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 increased from three
bedrooms
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 to five
bedrooms
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 by eliminating the living room,
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, the two back
garden
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 is compiled into
a
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one large garden and the kitchen is
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 called the social area.
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