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The plans below show a student accommodation buildings 2010 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The given plans illustrate the building of
student
accommodation
 from the year 2010 until now. Generally speaking, the
student
accommodation
 building underwent several changes from 2010 to till now. The number of
student
bedrooms
 is increased as well as car parking is
also
 added. To be specific, in the year 2010 the
student
accommodation
 has three gardens, two at the back side and one at the front. The hallway was much bigger and there were three
student
bedrooms
 in total with a living room in the north and a kitchen in the east. After some changes in the
accommodation
, the car parking is added in the south by removing the garden outside; inside the building, the hallway is shrunk and an en-suite room is added. The number of
student
bedrooms
 is
also
 increased from three
bedrooms
 to five
bedrooms
 by eliminating the living room,
however
, the two back
garden
Change to a plural noun
gardens
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 is compiled into
a
Remove the article
apply
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one large garden and the kitchen is
also
 called the social area.
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