Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects- Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, there is a discussion about whether
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or
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and
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is more important than
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. From my own perspective, I believe both of them are important which means they should deserve the same level of importance in school. On the
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hand, some people believe
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is
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of the most important subjects in school, I cannot agree more.
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of all, every
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of us is born in a
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and every
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has its own
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which is important to build up the concept of
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or nation in children's minds. Without the complete notion of their own nation, there is a prospective risk of a man who doesn't keep honour and loyalty to the land he lives and grows up. It probably does harm to the future of the
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. Another benefit of emphasising the significance of historical education is that there were so many scientists who contribute to the development of
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and
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, learning scientific
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will set up those heroes as idols in kids' minds which could have a better influence than learning textbooks only.
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, people in support of "
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and
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are more important than
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" believe that our society could make progress only with the great breakthrough in
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and
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but not in
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. Personally speaking, I realize it. Every breakthrough in
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and
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leads to a great revolution in our society,
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, James Watt, a man who recreate the steam engine to a better type, led the
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Industrial Revolution which totally changed the way we produce, even our politics! In the
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place, education in these two subjects has a strong possibility to select those talents with gifts to make a new branch of
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in our human
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. Without the educational system of
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and
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, it will be difficult to foster specialists in different scientific or industrial sectors. For the reasons I mentioned above, I strongly consider that
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,
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should share the same place in the educational concept and system. Only in
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way, we could develop children who could be able to take over the future of our world.
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