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some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience and personal qualities when they look for an employee.why is it the cas3?is it a positive or negative development?

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In the contemporary world,there is a lot of competition among youngsters in the race of getting job opportunities.several employers accept qualified candidates rather than one's
experienced
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.I firmly believe that it is more of a negative trend than
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positive
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.
This
 essay intends to discuss how experienced employees are a better option than qualified
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.
First
 and foremost,the major reason is job experience education.To be more specific,every organisation or association prefers
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highly skilled staff members as compared to a degree holder.
For instance
,a company need to give initial training for the newly recruited inexperienced
employee
.
In addition
 to
this
,the other main reason is
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personal quality.To be more specific,every business company has a protocol which needs to be strictly followed by all employees for the appropriate working of an organisation.To exemplify,
Although
 the candidate is fully qualified
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lack of personal qualities and social ethical values will impact the reputation of an organisation.The discipline of staff is equally important as
work
.
on the contrary
,the
well qualified
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employee
 studied and learnt various ongoing and future technical awareness.
For instance
,in the modern era of science and technology,each and every faculty of employment must require
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employee
 that
possess
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knowledge
 of handling techno gadgets. To conclude,in the above discussion it is quite evident that
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an experienced
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employee
 is more mature and capable of performing much better
work
 than of performing much better
work
 and capable of performing much better
work
 than a
qualification based
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employee
.
Although
 a candidate with academic
knowledge
 has
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theoretical
knowledge
 of the
work
but
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in practical
knowledge
 experienced one is much beneficial for the company's profit
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