Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree ot disagree with this opinion.

Many

people

are of the opinion that tourists should make payment for traditional and ancient attractions more than the citizens.

This

essay agrees with

this

believe

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and it will discuss reasons foreigners should pay more than citizens. The visit of

people

to tourism nowadays is alarming,

however

for an attraction centre to be in good shape it has to be maintained, ancient models and the activities present there has to be functional, it should

also

be accessible to everyone, but all

this

cannot be possible without funds,

hence

the need for more payment from visitors. An example is a report I read about

Mambila

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the Mambila

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plateau, with several ancient arts and models and they were all maintained by the money gotten from

people

who came from abroad.

Furthermore

, the provisions of basic infrastructure to the communities that

has

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tourism cannot be

over emphasized

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, amenities

such

as good road network, medical facilities,

accomodation

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accommodation

for lodging and

effective

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transport system. All

this

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these

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are

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needed to ensure the safety and comfort of the visitors especially those who want to explore for a longer time, a repelling and dangerous location will not be attractive to

outsides

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outsiders

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even though it has

cultural

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a cultural

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heritage. A typical example was when I visited Ikogosi

warm

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in warm

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spring and we were there late, so we

need

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a hotel,

fortunately

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,fortunately

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the place has a beautiful and comfortable lodge which forms part of the experience and fun. In conclusion,

this

essay was able to discuss the view that adventurers from

other country

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another country

other countries

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should pay more for moribund and cultural heritage than the

people

of the community. I

also

recommend that the government pass

this

into law for every

tourists

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centre.