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some people think that students who achieve the best academic results should be rewarded. others believe it is more important to reward students who show improvement. discuss both view and give your opinion

#people #students #results #reward #show #improvement
Educat
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Education
Educationion
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Education
 has a vital role in all
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human beings
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 life. A fair amount of people believe that
children
 who perform
significant
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 in
education
 must be appreciated whereas others argue that
children
 who show a slight improvement in studies should be
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acknowledged
ackowledged
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acknowledged
.In my
opinion
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 I support the latter view.
To begin
 with ,some
children
 have an innate capacity in
academic
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 when compared to other students so they always show
enoromous
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enormous
 performance in their scholastic. When we appreciate these
children
 they will definitely try to improve their current
level
 and
sucessfully
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successfully
 achieve
next
level
. Most
of
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the
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students always need
a
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good support not only from teachers but
also
 need encouragement from parents too. A small appreciation definitely enhances the motivation
level
 of the student and it boosts their confidence . Whenever a
child
have
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 performed best academic achievement the guardian must appreciate
then
 they will a proud feel about themself.
On the other hand
, if a
child
 shows a mild improvement in their studies when compared to
past
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 , definitely they should be rewarded. Because all,
children
does
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 not have the same intelligence
level
 ,
moreover
 their interest in academic can
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vary from
child
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one child
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 to
other
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another
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.
Therefore
 , if a
child
 has
a
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minimal progress in their
education
 , he or she must b encouraged.
As a
result
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 most of them attempt to repeat the success again in the future. A study conducted by psychology students in 2010 on school
children
 showed that there
were
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 a credible enhancement in examination results after proper reinforcement. To conclude,
education
 has a key role in the
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success
sucess
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success
 of a person.
Furthermore
, a positive reward while learning can have a profound impact on the
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children's
childrens
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 future
education
. I strongly argue that
children
 with slight educational improvement must be acknowledged it will boost their confidence.
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