The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this?. What can be done to solve this problem?.

In today's, world the mining of natural minerals has been increasing daily to satisfy public needs and
also
the population public is
also
growing enormously which is resulting in buying of goods more than usual if the same continues it can affect the future. In
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first
discussing
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the reason for the increase in buying of consumer goods and
then
the solution to the problem. To start the
first
reason for the rise in demand for consumer goods is due to increase in population
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dating back 20 years India's population is less than a billion and today it's more than 1.5 billion we can see the increase in public is too high. The
second
reason is technological changes affect the buying behaviours of pupils
moreover
we can watch two to 3 products every week
also
with new innovation due to
this
pupil are upgrading to experience new tech by
this
there is
also
boost in sales of products
this
is damage the nature due to gain in the extraction of raw materials
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researchers say that 20 years from now it will be hard to find crude oil if the minning of the oil goes the same as like now. The solution to reducing the damage to nature is
first
by adopting the creating of recycling methods like using recycled items
such
as iron, aluminium, and steel because they can be recycled and will not destroy the natural sources of the world and the
second
point is to reduce the usage of plastic and other non-decomposable substances
additionally
usage of paper or wooden bags will be the best alternative to
this
. To conclude as the public will rise but not decrease since of
this
the buying of customers materials will
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production
  • consumer goods
  • natural environment
  • damage
  • causes
  • overconsumption
  • demand
  • environmental regulations
  • enforcement
  • natural resources
  • industrial pollution
  • waste
  • inadequate
  • waste management practices
  • public awareness
  • education
  • sustainable alternatives
  • stricter environmental laws
  • recycling
  • responsible consumption
  • clean technologies
  • renewable energy
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