These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

tamilalagan nowadays people are willing to earn more money.human beings are earning through doing
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job.so working is
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routine
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individuals are willing to do more work because of the demand
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cash.so
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mankind
mankinds
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mankind
spend more time
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earning money in
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for example
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a joint family he
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to earn for
whole
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family.he is the one who needs to take care of
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his parents
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,wife,
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children
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siblings
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and siblings
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why he
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about funds and making it happen.
accordingly
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if they change
there
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career
often it will help them to get
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in
career
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their career
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.
hence
they got more money.if a person
start
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doing
there
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job in one company and working there for several years.the routine will
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them
bore
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.so
peoples
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are
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always want to get changes in surroundings,want to meet new
persons
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hence
it will improve their mental health.
secondly
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the advantages of changing
career
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much more than working in
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the same
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place or job.
canging
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changing
hanging
career
is getting them lot knowledge.it will improve their
life style
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lifestyle
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.along with increasing the understanding of
career
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the career
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.it will engage them for some years.
then
again they start to change their work.at
this
time humanity wants to lead their
life
very adventurous including
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.
finally
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there
is
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few
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disadvantages
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changing
career
.here if they suddenly alternate the working place.it takes time to adopt the atmosphere along with people.but once it will adopt
then
actually it will be very refreshing
theie
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their
these
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day to day
life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Skill diversification
  • Versatile
  • Professional network
  • Career advancement
  • Job satisfaction
  • Personal fulfillment
  • Market value
  • Job insecurity
  • Financial strain
  • Specialization
  • Adjustment periods
  • Unemployment
  • Deep expertise
  • Long-term benefits
  • Retirement plans
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