Nowadays, it is possible to move ocean creatures from their natural habitats at sea and have them relocated in amusement parks for the purpose of people's recreation. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Explain your reasons and support them with specific examples.

In the recent era, replacing

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sea creature from their habitats with an aquarium is easily doable with the great enhancement in transportation and technology.

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, the question still remains open whether

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relocation is beneficial for

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community's

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recreation or not. In

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essay, we will discuss both points, and I think it's disadvantageous to move the animals from their natural habitats. There are several benefits to relocating the ocean creatures to the amusement

park

.

First

, It will help to attract more tourism and local business can be benefitted from

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tourism.

Secondly

, it provides a great source of information educating the public and especially the students about the various sea species, their life and survival, and most importantly how we can save

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animal from extinction. For e.g, Dubai host one of the largest aquaria in the world, bring different lake animal from around the globe to attract tourist and as well as they provide

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on each different breed they carry for folk to understand what particular sea mammal eats to survive.

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drawback to nature. The main disadvantage of relocating the ocean creature is that it will impact their breeding process because most

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fish

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need a certain and stable temperature to breed. Furthermost, the space provided in the amusement

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is quite small that too shared with other creatures and noises from the tourist that can create an uncomfortable environment for them. For e.g,

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penguin for breeding requires a very low temperature and a stable ice platform for breeding. They cannot survive long in the man-made created snow house, so in the past 2 years, Hong Kong has seen a decline in the number of penguins in their WorldOcean

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. With

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has decided not to move the penguin from their north pole habitat to an artificial snow room. We are not denying that having creatures in the amusement

park

is beneficial for the community to learn and promote tourism.

However

, with the aforementioned points, one will agree that it's disadvantageous to relocate any ocean species from its natural habitat as they cannot survive long with changes in the surrounding atmosphere and noise.