Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other about the trip

Dear
Mrs.
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Shah, I am writing
this
letter to inform
that
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you that
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will come
your
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on your
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school
trip
. My name is
suhani
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Shani
, my son
rahul
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is
student
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a student
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of
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on
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your school campus.
Last
night, my son tell me about our
trip
and
also
tell about
parent
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parents
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come with together. So
i
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I
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decided to come with my son
in
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our
trip
.
Moreover
,
i
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will help cook the food for all students and teachers . I have many ideas for new healthy food . So
i
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can manage
cook
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meals .
However
,
i
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am a nurse ,
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in case
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incase
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in case
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of
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any child is
engage
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so
i
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could treatment.
Lastly
, please
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me extra detail about our
trip
so
i
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will help you .my contact number is 8756454223. I hope we will meet soon Yours sincerely, Suhani
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