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in some
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that requires
teenagers
to do voluntary
work
in the middle of their free
time
. I strongly agree with that norm because doing some volunteer
work
can give a
lot
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also
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.
First
, unpaid
work
can
benefit
teenagers
in
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of experience.
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some voluntary activities,
teenagers
will gain a
lot
of advantages,
such
as knowledge and experience, that can be
for their life in the future. By working
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theCorrect article usage
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early
time
,
teenagers
will force themselves to get used to a
lot
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of occupations that they will face in their
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when growing
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. Unpaid
work
, largely, helps
teenagers
to improve their
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and character.
Teenagers
who are
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used to
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a
lot
of
worksFix the agreement mistake
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, paid or unpaid in the past
time
, will be more
and stronger in the future.
For
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, voluntary
works
also
give a
lot
of
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. There are many kinds of
works
in the resident that can be done by
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such
as cleaning the public facilities, maintaining
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placeFix the agreement mistake
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of worship, and other social voluntary
works
. In school, especially high school,
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studentFix the agreement mistake
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can participate in a
lot
of activities that can give
benefit
to
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community
. For
communityAdd an article
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, despite material
benefit
, unpaid
works
by
teenagers
also
bring immaterial
benefit
such
as improvement in
community
unity and relationship among member.
Although
voluntary
work
by
teenagers
brings a
lot
of positive impacts to society,
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there must be
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that
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that scheme.
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should impose
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limitationFix the agreement mistake
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in
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of
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of
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and
time
spent by
teenagers
who are doing voluntary
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. The regulation is needed to avoid
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of
teenagers
. In brief,
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an obligation
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that requires
teenagers
to have voluntary
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will bring a
lot
of
benefitChange to a plural noun
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not only
forChange preposition
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but
also
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itselfCorrect pronoun usage
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as long as there is clear
that
controlCorrect subject-verb agreement
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unpaid
work
implementation.